I quite like the energy of this. Could have used some filtering on the lead synth.
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I quite like the energy of this. Could have used some filtering on the lead synth.
Thank you so much for the feedback!
The variation and details are what really make this track. They definitely counted for something :)
Thanks! Its great to hear that most people noticed the extra 30 hours spent poking on this thing. I will consider it worth it to do that with all my tracks moving forward *v*
The concept of the song is good. The execution is what lacks.
I think the lead synth could use some texture so it's not so, i don't know, grating?
You should also let more of the background instruments shine through sometimes. The best moments were around 0:17 and 0:24 when the lead stopped, and that glitched background synth provided a nice contrast. I think that kind of thing is lacking in the rest of the song, and it starts to sound somewhat bland as a result.
Imagine if you had a different instrument doing the lead melody from 0:00 to 0:13? I think that'd be the kind of contrast that would spice up this track.
Overall though, good concept and good effort.
Wow, yeah that's some really good points. Thanks! I totally agree with you. Probably could've used some more "question & answer" techniques in the melody as well.
I've been trying to work more on contrasts and using silences lately. So let's hope it's not as much of a problem in future tracks ;)
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